Review for ohpaperdoll
USERNAME / TITLE
I love the username. It sounds so familiar; like maybe I read it in a book, or maybe I had somehow visited your diary a time ago. Anyway it just sounds nice.
FIRST IMPRESSION
Very simplistic, I totally dig this little thing you’ve got going on – modest yet intense, or something. The first words I see are pretty dramatic and depressing… I feel myself bracing for the road of angsty reading ahead of me. Ahem.
LAYOUT
Uh, are you sure Pink Design designed this? I couldn’t find it anywhere on her website… Anyway I really like it, it works for your diary. Yep.
NAVIGATION / CONTACT
I haaaate having to scroll down all the way to the bottom to find links, but then again your entries don’t tend to be all that long anyway. You’ve got it down pat though (haha)
GRAMMAR
Whatever. It’s cool I guess. If you want to know why I think capitalization is an important thing, you can go read EVERYONE ELSE’S review. I should just write a statement about it and paste it into everyone’s grammar section from now on.
WRITING
BOYS ARE NOT EVERYTHING. Would you please fucking figure that shit out! You need to find yourself before trying to find some perfect guy to sweep you away and stick your life in his own personal envelope. I don’t know what this was all about but it was really cute. You have a good poet-mind. I don’t know… I kept reading and reading and reading but everything was, not a blur, but like sitting on a train going thousands of miles an hour. All mushed together and depressing and really not getting anywhere. I couldn’t really pick up on any serious happening. Your writing is good, and obviously you are super bomb at expressing your feelings, but I don’t know. You need to express more than one type of goddamn feeling. Talk about something important. Like politics, global warming, I don’t know, haha… Something!!
EXTRAS
You have links to your Xanga and DeviantArt… Tight. Your Xanga seems to tell more about your actual life, rather than your smitten heart and jumbled poetry about hearts and kissing. Your DeviantArt was nice… Nothing I aint’s seen befo’, but definitely some nice stuff. There’s nothing on your diary that I could look to right away to get a good idea of who you are… Some sort of “about me” page or something… So that’s crappy!
WOULD I COME BACK?
Prolly not, but it’s not your fault. I’m just not very fascinated with the love lives of angsty teenagers in today’s society.
03.30.05